Day #1
Dear Lizzy,
It's only three days till my son and brother are off to the war against great Britain.
In that time we are going to spend all our time together.
I'm a scared for them.
At lest George Washington will be there to protect them.
I just wish Britain didn't have to be so mean.
I'm going to fight for freedom when my son and brother are off to war.
I'm going to be fighting for the Intolerable Acts to be recalled.
This war needs to happen because we need to have freedom.
I feel mad about all the things that Britain has done to us.
I want to take my son and brother to the beach and watch the sun set, it mite be the last time I get the chance.
I pray every day I get the chance
your friend, Elizabeth
Day #2
Dear Lizzy,
We are at the beach watching the sunset, I wish you could be here.
We will have to go home in a minute.
I really enjoined it.
with love, Elizabeth
Day #3
Dear Lizzy
It's the last day this is the day I've been dreading.
As I pack for him I remember all the good times we had.
As I give my last kiss I say "I love you" I shead a tear and say "good bye."
Your heart broken friend, Elizabeth
Dear Lizzy,
It's only three days till my son and brother are off to the war against great Britain.
In that time we are going to spend all our time together.
I'm a scared for them.
At lest George Washington will be there to protect them.
I just wish Britain didn't have to be so mean.
I'm going to fight for freedom when my son and brother are off to war.
I'm going to be fighting for the Intolerable Acts to be recalled.
This war needs to happen because we need to have freedom.
I feel mad about all the things that Britain has done to us.
I want to take my son and brother to the beach and watch the sun set, it mite be the last time I get the chance.
I pray every day I get the chance
your friend, Elizabeth
Day #2
Dear Lizzy,
We are at the beach watching the sunset, I wish you could be here.
We will have to go home in a minute.
I really enjoined it.
with love, Elizabeth
Day #3
Dear Lizzy
It's the last day this is the day I've been dreading.
As I pack for him I remember all the good times we had.
As I give my last kiss I say "I love you" I shead a tear and say "good bye."
Your heart broken friend, Elizabeth
This is actually pretty good Emma! I wished you would have involved that actual son and brother into the activities, but the brief letters entailing the highlights of what you did before the anyone going off to war were well written. Next time however, make sure the main character have more of a prominent role. 90%
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